What to do there: Go out into nature. A forest, the woods, the veld, your local park. Anywhere where there is grass and shrubs will do. Write and meditate until you get a new way of looking at nature.
I breathe in,
filling my lungs with fresh, sweet life
I breathe out,
sharing my energy with those around me
I can see it,
the flow of the lives of the wild
They breathe in with me,
soft and slow,
then breathe out,
short and hot
We breathe together
Live together
Survive together
I feel the earth
breathing on her own
In through the fresh, green leaves,
down into the network of thick, tangled roots
to be spread all around the world
I feel her energy
dancing beneath my feet
She breathes out
with a heavy sigh,
causing a sharp breeze to whip my face and twirl my hair
The mountains groan in response,
they have grown tired from sitting so long
They store the energy being shared with them,
waiting for when they can be free once again
And in turn,
they protect this precious cycle
I can see it
I’ve been writing a lot about nature this year, so I was pretty interested in using this prompt to find “a new way of looking at nature”. I initially wasn’t sure what to do and how exactly I would go about this, but I began to think about breathing and how we share our breath with those around us. I had written a poem about breathing before, but this time I wanted to focus more on breathing for others instead of breathing for oneself. In my mind I pictured this great, big flow of energy and life soaring all through the sky and wind. Life was being shared in this cycle, moving from the trees to the ground then right back up into the air, moving so fast and powerful that it was actually visible. It was hard to make my picture into words because I wanted it to be more calm and peaceful to show the tranquility and simplicity of the whole thing and not just focus on the rush of breath.
Dear Kayla
I thought this was a very simple and beautiful poem. I liked the way you personified nature as breathing out through the wind and how in the poem you show how everything and everyone is connected. I think you really demonstrated a new way of looking at nature.
-Savannah